  Great technical skill. I like the blood and gore and the grittiness you've successfully portrayed here. I don't exactly get what's going on in the first panel (maybe I'll understand it better if I see the previous pages
 ), but if that's supposed to be liquid, I think it sort of looks more like the trunk of a tree than splashing liquid. Also, the hand is kind of small. The second and third panel look abstract to me. While I think that is interesting, I don't think abstract is what you're aiming for here. The guy reminds me of the dad from Death Note  Overall, nice job  The Artist thought this was FAIR
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CommentsDevious Comments Thanks a lot for taking a look! It means a lot that you took the time to write one of these.
The weird thing in the first panel is supposed to be a popped balloon, which i don't have too much experience drawing, believe it or not. I'm afraid i don't know what Death Note is, but he's supposed to resemble one of our instructors. -- You may or may not find this artistically useful: [link] If you check out my page, there's a PRETTY good chance i'll drop by yours. You're very welcome! Well, for someone who doesn't have much experience drawing, you're quite good
Death Note is a manga. It's very popular, and very famous. It's like a psychological/fantasy thriller. If you're interested, try reading it. I'm sure you'll enjoy it [link]--  Disney fanart (currently growing)[link] Gothic and Dark [link] Oh i have plenty of drawing experience, just not drawing deflated/popped balloons.
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